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| Selection of the story for a page: Some would say that there are no happy days at the DMV, especially in the suspension unit. Mondays in particular would not be thought of as happy days. Yet, this Monday, Tina is walking on air. Now, Tina is one of the nicest and most pleasant people at the DMV anyway, but today, she positively glows. Tina is so happy, that even the surly callers she encounters as a DMV supervisor seem to enjoy the experience. KC comes by. Today, Tina is wearing a white, high collar blouse with puff sleeves, a long wool skirt, and black lace stockings. " Morning, Tina...Looking pretty today. Maybe a little conservative? (Tina motions KC to come closer) " Thanks.....I'm not wearing any panties!" "Bad girl!" (Both start giggling.....) ",It's a BEAUTIFUL day, isn't it?" " Boy, you're in a good mood...." " (sigh) I'm just happy....." (text by Graymuzzle) |
Text after I've scripted it: page 74 - CAPTION "some would say that there are no happy days at the DMVs suspension unit... especially on mondays..." shows tina looking very happy, walking along minding her own business (far shot) "yet this monday, tina is walking on air" - she is wearing a high collared white blouse with puff sleeves, a long wool skirt and black lace stockings - shows tina smiling and talking on the phone. CAPTION "tina is so happy that even the surliest callers she encounters seem to enjoy the experience" you can sort of see KC behind her - kc "morning tina! you're looking pretty today! a little conservative though." she chuckles. tina is motioning kc forward and whispers "thanks... i'm not wearing any panties!" while blushing - kc "bad girl!" and giggles. tina "it is a beautiful day isn't it?" kc "boy, you sure are in a good mood!" tina sighs "i'm just happy..." (you can see someone approaching) |
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